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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Quick check-up on which sentence is better?

Which sentence is better? Should I include 'in which' or 'where' or the first? Thank you!!

In my recent work and like the position, I incorporated databases and created my own in GIS, which users can filter for data in the mapping of bicycle accidents.

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In my recent work and like the position, I incorporated databases and created my own in GIS, in which users can filter for data in the mapping of bicycle accidents.

OR where?

In my recent work and like the position, I incorporated databases and created my own in GIS, where users can filter for data in the mapping of bicycle accidents.
  

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First, please clarify. In my recent work Do you mean 'in my last job'? and like the position, <<<<<<<< What does this mean ???

  • First, please clarify.
  • In my recent work Do you mean 'in my last job'?
  • and like the position, <<<<<<<< What does this mean ???
  • I incorporated databases .
  • .
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First, please clarify.

In my recent work Do you mean 'in my last job'?

and like the position,<<<<<<<< What does this mean ???

I incorporated databases . . . What does this mean?
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First question, yes.

Second question, it's a thank you note, so like the position I am writing about. In context and the whole thing, it makes sense.

Third, it is a job responsibility.

Thank you very much for your reply. I am concerned about which is better grammatically.
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l'd begin all these sentences with
In my last job, which I liked, I . . .

Which sentence is better? Should I include 'in which' or 'where' or the first? Only 'which' is correct.
But do you want it to refer to just your own database, or al
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So do not write 'in which'? Only 'which'? Thank you!

Well, it is like the position discussed and like the job posting of the position, so hopefully, that makes more sense for you, so I do not want to say I liked the position i.e., 'which I liked'.

The answer is both but I am trying to keep it simple and concise.

Thank you so much!!
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I asked you if you meant 'in my last job', and you said 'yes'. Somehow we misunderstod each other.

Would you like to post your latest version, for a final check?

Clive
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You could not have asked at a better time. I am confusing myself and keep reading. I cannot determine if this is okay or needs to be changed. Is this fine?

In recent work and like the position, I incorporated databases and created my own in GIS, which users can filter for data in the mapping of bicycle accidents. For example, if a user wants to determine where left-turn accidents in 2004
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After reading, I think it is fine, but let me know if you think otherwise. I am settling on this:

In recent work and like the position, I incorporated databases and created my own in GIS, which users can filter for data in the mapping of bicycle accidents. For example, if a user wants to determine where left-turn accidents in 2004 occurred.
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In recent work and like the position, I told you that I don't know what this means. You need to say it some other way.

I asked you what 'which' refers to, and you did not answer my question.

For example, if a user wants to determine where left-turn accidents in 2004 occurred. This
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Okay, thank you for your help. I am factoring your feedback in. I think it is difficult to understand by reading the individual sentence piecemeal without the full body. Thank you so much again for your replies.

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