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Compared to standard hydrogel contact lenses, silicone hydrogel contact lenses allow up to five times more oxygen to suffuse through the contact lens and reach the surface and cornea of the eye.

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Basically, Silicone Hydrogel Contact Lenses are similar to (are the same as) Standard Hydrogel Soft Lenses but Oxygens significantly suffuse five times more on Silicone Hydrogel Contact Lenses.

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Basically, Silicone Hydrogel Contact Lenses are similar to Standard Hydrogel Soft Lenses but they allow Oxygen to significantly (any adverb suggestions?) suffuse five times more on Silicone Hydrogel Contact Len

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Basically, the silicone hydrogel contact lenses is the same as standard hydrogel soft lenses--both are made of plastics that are hard when dry but readily absorb water. Except, the silicone hydrogel contact lenses allow more oxygen to suffuse through the lens to the cornea than standard hydrogel soft lenses.

Basically, the silicone hydrogel contact lenses is are the same as standard hydrogel soft lenses--both are made of plastics that are hard when dry but readily absorb water. Except, However, the silicone hydrogel contact lenses allow more oxygen to suffuse through the lens to the cornea than standard hydrogel soft lenses.

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Basically, silicone hydrogel contact lenses are similar to standard hydrogel soft lenses but, significantly, they allow oxygen to significantly (any adverb suggestions?) to suffuse five times more rapidly. o