There are several threads dealing with cover/motivation letters here on English Forums. When you type "cover letters" in the search box (upper left) you'll get several hits that will help you improve the content of your letter. Your English is, for the most part, quite good, but I believe that you need to look at how a good cover letter is constructed, and what kind of information it should contain.
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