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Nancy2006 Posted 7 years ago
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Hello everyone! I wonder if the introduction paragraph I have written for the question below was acceptable or not. In the First Trainer book I am teaching myself, it was advised to state the purpose of the report in the first paragraph. However, i have been told not to do that by my teacher. Therefore, I would like to get some advice from you guys. Thank you very much!

Question: You have had a class dicussion about sports and your teacher has asked you to suggest a sport that could be played at your college. Describe a sport that you have tried and say why you think it would be popular. Write your report in 140-190 words in an appropriate style.

Playing sports has gradually become more and more popular with students at college as they begin to take care of their health. The purpose of this report is to make a few observations about cycling which I have tried and explain why it would interest students.

  

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DId you read my comment in your previous post on this same question? htm When learning to write academic essays, it is best to build your skills in writing thesis statements. The underlined is an example.

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  • DId you read my comment in your previous post on this same question?
  • htm When learning to write academic essays, it is best to build your skills in writing thesis statements.
  • The underlined is an example.
  • Playing sports has gradually become more and more popular with students in college as they are concerned about maintaining their health.
  • To me, cycling is an excellent choice as it can be competitive, can be used for transportation, is good cardiovascular exercise, and is not too costly.
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DId you read my comment in your previous post on this same question?

https://www.englishforums.com/English/B2Writing/bxhmpb/post.htm


When learning to write academic essays, it is best to build your skills in writing thesis statements. The underlined is a

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