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Hi,
Here more doubts with text I have to write, please tell if it's correct. questions after my text.
Every Shabbat Yaniv opens his house to every Jew and Israeli who is in the region for a warm and traditional Sabbath's meal with a kiddush in a magical Jewish atmosphere filled with laughter, joy, new acquaintances, words of Torah, games, abundant food and even a place to sleep.
1. is that accepted to write "opens his house"? where a person hosting people at his home.
2. "who is in the region"- for plural (every jew and Israeli) is that correct putting in that way?
3. "for a warm and traditional Sabbath's meal"- is that grammatically correct?
4. new acquaintances- I'm looking for expression that describing to meet new people... is that correct?
5. abundant food - is that correct to write it that way? where people have many food to eat.
6. "even a place to sleep", here my doubt if it should be "to sleep in"?
Top answer
"traditional Sabbath's meal" should be "traditional Sabbath meal". You wrote Shabbat in one place and Sabbath in another. I'm not sure whether that was intentional.
- "traditional Sabbath's meal" should be "traditional Sabbath meal".
- You wrote Shabbat in one place and Sabbath in another.
- I'm not sure whether that was intentional.
- "Sabbath" is the anglicised word (not specific to the Jewish religion).
- To me, "words of Torah" should be "words of the Torah".
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"traditional Sabbath's meal" should be "traditional Sabbath meal". You wrote Shabbat in one place and Sabbath in another. I'm not sure whether that was intentional. "Sabbath" is the anglicised word (not specific to the Jewish religion).
To me, "words of Torah" should be "words of the Torah". However, there are numerous Google hits for the phrase without "the". I'm not sure why. Maybe it
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