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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Questions on ad content writing and another
Hi,
1.(cap ad)
Adjustable tuck-in backstrap with embroidered XXX logo on front and XXX logo on back. -- Why not 'on the back' or 'on the front'?
2. (toy car)
Full function radio-controlled XXX has oversized off-road tires to venture ... -- Why no comma after 'function'?
3. The XXX was homemade and stuffed with chunks of king crab, minced mushroom, and shrimp.
Could it be this too?
The XXX was homemade and stuffed with chunks of a king crab (king crabs), minced mushroom, and shrimps.
1.(cap ad)
Adjustable tuck-in backstrap with embroidered XXX logo on front and XXX logo on back. -- Why not 'on the back' or 'on the front'?
2. (toy car)
Full function radio-controlled XXX has oversized off-road tires to venture ... -- Why no comma after 'function'?
3. The XXX was homemade and stuffed with chunks of king crab, minced mushroom, and shrimp.
Could it be this too?
The XXX was homemade and stuffed with chunks of a king crab (king crabs), minced mushroom, and shrimps.
Top answer
(cap ad) Adjustable tuck-in backstrap with embroidered *** logo on front and *** logo on back. -- Why not 'on the back' or 'on the front'? -- It is just a descriptive phrase with all unnecessary function words eliminated (much like a newspaper headline).
- (cap ad) Adjustable tuck-in backstrap with embroidered *** logo on front and *** logo on back.
- -- Why not 'on the back' or 'on the front'?
- -- It is just a descriptive phrase with all unnecessary function words eliminated (much like a newspaper headline).
- You noticed, I presume, that it is not a complete sentence?
- 2.
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1.(cap ad)
Adjustable tuck-in backstrap with embroidered *** logo on front and *** logo on back. -- Why not 'on the back' or 'on the front'? -- It is just a descriptive phrase with all unnecessary function words eliminated (much like a newspaper headline). You noticed, I presume, that it is not a complete sentence?
2. (toy car)
Full function radio-controlled *** ha
1.(cap ad)
Adjustable tuck-in backstrap with embroidered *** logo on front and *** logo on back. -- Why not 'on the back' or 'on the front'? -- It is just a descriptive phrase with all unnecessary function words eliminated (much like a newspaper headline). You noticed, I presume, that it is not a complete sentence?
2. (toy car)
Full function radio-controlled *** ha
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