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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Question to content of an application

Can you please help me with my covering letter?
Are the following sentences correct?

1) "...with graduation of my masters..."
2) "I want to bring the knowledge to the company."

Thank you very much!:)
  

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It's hard to comment without more context, but your words seem awkward and unnatural. 1) Say eg I have an MBA. 2) This doesn't seem worth saying.

— Clive

  • It's hard to comment without more context, but your words seem awkward and unnatural.
  • 1) Say eg I have an MBA.
  • 2) This doesn't seem worth saying.
  • Every new employee does this Clive
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It's hard to comment without more context, but your words seem awkward and unnatural.

1) Say eg I have an MBA.
2) This doesn't seem worth saying. Every new employee does this

Clive
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