Question about word and which clause
"The study tested on abaloparatide, a selective PTH1 receptor agonist, which is able to promote bone formation and increased bone mass in osteopenic OVX cynos relative to Veh controls."
-Is the word Promote correctly used?
-Am I using the which clause correctly?
-Is there any other correction or suggestions you want to make?
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" -Is the word Promote correctly used? Yes -Am I using the which clause correctly? Remove the comma before 'which', as the clause seems to provide information necessary to identify the selective PTH1 receptor agonist -Is there any other correction or suggestions you want to make?
- " -Is the word Promote correctly used?
- Yes -Am I using the which clause correctly?
- Remove the comma before 'which', as the clause seems to provide information necessary to identify the selective PTH1 receptor agonist -Is there any other correction or suggestions you want to make?
- What part of the sentence does the phrase 'relative to Veh controls' refer to?
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"The study tested on abaloparatide, a selective PTH1 receptor agonist, which is able to promote bone formation and increased bone mass in osteopenic OVX cynos relative to Veh controls."
-Is the word Promote correctly used? Yes
-Am I using the which clause correctly? Remove the comma before 'which', as the clause seems to provide information necessary
0"Promote" and "which" are used well, but you don't have a complete sentence. "Study" is the subject, and there is no verb for it.
0How about this?
This study showed that abaloparatide, a selective PTH1 receptor agonist, stimulated bone formation and improved bone mass in osteopenic OVX cynos relative to Veh controls.
Why do you want to paraphrase the original?
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