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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Question about SUMMARIZING

Hi!

Is this correct?

Summarizing the above mentioned, due to the joint actions of all parties, significant losses have been caused.

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Anonymous Is this correct? It is turgid and verbose. Pity your poor reader.

— Mister Micawber

  • Anonymous Is this correct?
  • It is turgid and verbose.
  • Pity your poor reader.
  • In summary, significant losses have been caused by the actions of all parties.
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AnonymousIs this correct?
It is turgid and verbose. Pity your poor reader.

In summary, significant losses have been caused by the actions of all parties.
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Mister MicawberIt is turgid and verbose. Pity your poor reader.
Right on!!!

Some people have the impression that bombastic writing sounds more legal, authoritative or business-like.
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