Question about sentences

Dear all,

" We don't need to heed this hooligan's advice. Why is he always getting at Government employees?. We would be astonished if we get to know the remuneration he receives per month. Its about 5 times higher than what a clerk receives. Its crystal clear that the video of him has resurfaced was in response to the shower of criticism from Government employees that were aired months ago following his first unfair talking about Govt employees."

The above sentences I prepared on the basis of the criticism from one MP ( Member of parliament) on Government employees. Sir, I would like to know whether the above sentence is correct or not . Expecting your reply.