Question about sentences

Dear all,

Generally cine artists are loaded and they can easily set up gymnesium in their houses and majority of the youngsters have it and enjoy. They can play to their heart's content. While we are all being facing complete shutdown in the backdrop of Corona, it's illegal to go and work out there. So the advertisement posted like this doesn't bring anything but getting on our nerves instead.

I would like to know the above sentence is correct or not.