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Cat navy 425 Posted 7 years ago
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Dear all,

India's spacecraft named Chandrayaan crashed just two kilometres away from the moon's surface. Chairman of Indan Space Research Organisation (ISRO) broke down when he met Indian Prime Minister, but the Prime Minister hugged and consoled him. This is the context of the following text. Please correct the following text.


"I was really moved on seeing the gesture of our Prime Minister when ISRO Chairman broke down before him, he hugged and consoled him. As a Prime Minister he could've behaved differently. Politics apart, this is a clear proof of his gentleness. We are really proud to get a prime minister like this."


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"I was really moved on seeing the gesture of our Prime Minister when the ISRO Chairman broke down in front of before him. He hugged and consoled him. As a Prime Minister he could've behaved differently.

  • "I was really moved on seeing the gesture of our Prime Minister when the ISRO Chairman broke down in front of before him.
  • He hugged and consoled him.
  • As a Prime Minister he could've behaved differently.
  • Politics apart, this is a clear proof of his gentleness.
  • "
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"I was really moved on seeing the gesture of our Prime Minister when the ISRO Chairman broke down in front of before him. He hugged and consoled him. As a Prime Minister he could've behaved differently. Politics apart, this is a clear proof of his gentleness. We are really proud to have a prime minister like this."

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