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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Question about job position
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Please take a look at the following job position. Is it understandable? I do understand that this looks super long, but I must include all divisions, units etc.
John Smith, a senior customs expert from the BerlinTactical Tasks Sector at the Tactical Tasks Unit of Intelligence Division of Customs Criminal Administration of the State Revenue Service
Thank you
Please take a look at the following job position. Is it understandable? I do understand that this looks super long, but I must include all divisions, units etc.
John Smith, a senior customs expert from the BerlinTactical Tasks Sector at the Tactical Tasks Unit of Intelligence Division of Customs Criminal Administration of the State Revenue Service
Thank you
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It's not much better, but I'd use some commas: John Smith, a senior customs expert from the Berlin Tactical Tasks Sector,Tactical Tasks Unit, Intelligence Division, Customs Criminal Administration, State Revenue Service .
- It's not much better, but I'd use some commas: John Smith, a senior customs expert from the Berlin Tactical Tasks Sector,Tactical Tasks Unit, Intelligence Division, Customs Criminal Administration, State Revenue Service .
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It's not much better, but I'd use some commas:
John Smith, a senior customs expert from the Berlin Tactical Tasks Sector,Tactical Tasks Unit, Intelligence Division, Customs Criminal Administration, State Revenue Service.
John Smith, a senior customs expert from the Berlin Tactical Tasks Sector,Tactical Tasks Unit, Intelligence Division, Customs Criminal Administration, State Revenue Service.
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