Question about how this sentence should be
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I'm writing a cover letter...
Is the sentence written like this okay?:
This position would help me become an expert with QuickBooks, and would help me gain experience and familiarity with an accounting position.
Or should it be:
This position would help me become an expert with QuickBooks, and would help me gain experience in and familiarity with an accounting position.
Top answer
This position would help me bec ome exp ert with QuickBo oks and gain experience in an accounting position. No 'an' and no comma. The 'familiarity' phrase is redundant, as is 'would help me'.
- This position would help me bec ome exp ert with QuickBo oks and gain experience in an accounting position.
- No 'an' and no comma.
- The 'familiarity' phrase is redundant, as is 'would help me'.
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This position would help me become expert with QuickBooks and gain experience in an accounting position.
No 'an' and no comma. The 'familiarity' phrase is redundant, as is 'would help me'.
0Mr LawlerThis position would help me become an expert with QuickBooks
Do you expect your new employer to give you on-the-job training for this software?
Usually applicants tell the new employer what skills that have so they can immediately be productive on the job and not require any training at all!
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