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Hey. I'm writing a script. We're thrown straight into a scene...
Cut to: Carl tumbling down a flight of stairs, lands hard on the landing below.
Cut to: Carl tumbling down a flight of stairs, landing hard on the landing below.
Cut to: Carl tumbling down a flight of stairs and lands hard on the landing below.
Cut to: Carl tumbling down a flight of stairs and landing hard on the landing below.
1) "And" or not? "Lands" or "landing"? What sounds better?
2) Is there another word than "lands/landing" I could use to avoid repetition?
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anonymous 1) "And" or not? "Lands" or "landing"? What sounds better?
- anonymous 1) "And" or not?
- "Lands" or "landing"?
- What sounds better?
- I like the first one, but both work fine.
- anonymous 2) Is there another word than "lands/landing" I could use to avoid repetition?
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anonymous1) "And" or not? "Lands" or "landing"? What sounds better?
I like the first one, but both work fine.
anonymous2) Is there another word than "lands/landing" I could use to avoid repetition?
Funny, but I didn't even notice that till you said something. Don't worry about it.
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