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Ruchi Chuhan Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

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There is nothing wrong, when your belly shakes whenever you laugh

Please correct me, sentence framing.
  

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There is nothing wro ng if your belly shakes whenever you laugh.

— Mister Micawber

  • There is nothing wro ng if your belly shakes whenever you laugh.
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There is nothing wrong if your belly shakes whenever you laugh.
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The comma is offputting. I also think "if" would be better than "when":

There is nothing wrong if your belly shakes whenever you laugh.

(Edit: Oops, I see now that I just repeat the previous answer!)
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