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LeGion12359 Posted 11 years ago
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Could you please tell me if the below paragraph is grammatical and idiomatic?

Dear Sir/Madam,
I would like to study as an International Graduate student in you university. Could you please provide me with the information regarding what programs you are offering in 'Master of Civil Engineering' for both research and course-work categories? I couldn't find it in the university website.
  

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Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to enroll as an i nternational graduate student at your university. Could you please provide me with information regard ing your Master of Civil Engineering programs ? I have been unable to locate that information on your university website.

— Mister Micawber

  • Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to enroll as an i nternational graduate student at your university.
  • Could you please provide me with information regard ing your Master of Civil Engineering programs ?
  • I have been unable to locate that information on your university website.
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Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to enroll as an international graduate student at your university. Could you please provide me with information regarding your Master of Civil Engineering programs ? I have been unable to locate that information on your university website.
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Mister Micawber I would like to enroll as an international graduate student at your university. Could you please provide me with information regarding your Master of Civil Engineering programs ?
Shouldn't it be like this:
Could you please provide me with the information..........?
Because information is specific, i.e regarding Mas
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Please use what I have given you if you wish a proper native letter. I have now written hundreds of these **** things.
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