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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Those awkward moments when you're spending the night at a hospital with your grandpop after his surgery, a doctor, on your cig. break asks for your number, you politely refuse but he takes slight offense anywho, and then on each subsequent break, he runs into you.
  

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Those awkward moments when you're spending the night at the hospital with your grandfather after his surgery : on your cigarette break a doctor asks for your number, you politely refuse but he takes offense anyway, and then on each subsequent break, you run into each other again.

  • Those awkward moments when you're spending the night at the hospital with your grandfather after his surgery : on your cigarette break a doctor asks for your number, you politely refuse but he takes offense anyway, and then on each subsequent break, you run into each other again.
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Those awkward moments when you're spending the night at the hospital with your grandfather after his surgery: on your cigarette break a doctor asks for your number, you politely refuse but he takes offense anyway, and then on each subsequent break, you run into each other again.

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