If you post your letter on the site (ensuring you leave out any personal details) then members may look at the letter and make suggests. Everybody on this site is a volunteer and therefore it is free, however as it isn't a professional service there is no guarantee that a member with a great proof reading skills will answer it. Should you wish to pay for this service then I can recommend a senior teacher on this site who offers a professional service.
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