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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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hello, i'd like to know if this sentence is grammatically correct:
"I spent a while just staring at her who had turned into snow."
thanks
"I spent a while just staring at her who had turned into snow."
thanks
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No the sentence doesn't work. Can you give me the context (the surrounding sentences) to help you re-word it.
- No the sentence doesn't work.
- Can you give me the context (the surrounding sentences) to help you re-word it.
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No the sentence doesn't work. Can you give me the context (the surrounding sentences) to help you re-word it.
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Priest: Now you may go to heaven, ghost...
Woman turns into snow
Priest: "I spent a while just staring at her who had turned into snow"
The priest is just staring at her and she's a pile of snow now
I hope you can help me.
Thanks in advance.
Priest: Now you may go to heaven, ghost...
Priest: "I spent a while just staring at her who had turned into snow"
The priest is just staring at her and she's a pile of snow now
I hope you can help me.
Thanks in advance.
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AnonymousThe priest is just staring at her and she's a pile of snow nowI believe this is what you want: As the priest stared at her, she turned into snow.
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