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Forlan Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

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Hi,

Is the writing style correct? Does an American undesrtand the below sentence?

What is your investment goal? college? money? or else?
  

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An investment goal is asking why you want to have money. It doesn't make sense to ask if having money is your investment goal. What is your investment goal?

  • An investment goal is asking why you want to have money.
  • It doesn't make sense to ask if having money is your investment goal.
  • What is your investment goal?
  • To have enough money to send your kids to an Ivy League college?
  • To be able to retire at the age of 50?
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An investment goal is asking why you want to have money. It doesn't make sense to ask if having money is your investment goal.

What is your investment goal? To have enough money to send your kids to an Ivy League college? To be able to retire at the age of 50? To own a vacation home? Something else?
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Thanks Grammar Geek

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