0
Davefromthefreeway Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

quality correction needed

0 00Hello, I have this profile due in three days and i need help making it sound rich and grammatically correct. You might recall this because i posted something similar earlier but this version if very different. This is the most important post in the world to me, please correct properly, thanks 02br
01u02br
02br
00Describe up to two qualities that you possess that you feel would make you a good candidate for engineering at U of T. Your answer should not exceed 150 words. 02br
02u00---------------------------------------------------02br
00As a committed member of the Western Association of Robotics Personnel for three years, I have developed outstanding leadership and teamwork skills that I use on a daily basis. Hectic days with sleepless night played off when our team defeated 80 others to win the Greater Toronto Regional and we went to compete for the national Championship in Atlanta, Georgia. Because of my hard work and dedication, I was promoted to head of the electrical team by my second year. When my teachers saw how interested I was in engineering, they recommended U of T Engineering Enrichment Program, which I entered with fascination and enthusiasm. DEEP has shown me just how exciting hands-on work can be, and Saturday Science Academy has inspired me once again and has given me a great insight of University education. 02br
00---------------------------------------------------0-
  

Top answer

0 01blockquote 01cite 10Davefromthefreeway12cite 10Hello, I have this profile due in three days and i need help making it sound rich and grammatically correct. You might recall this because i posted something similar earlier but this version if very different. This is the most important post in the world to me, please correct properly, thanks 12br 11u 12br 12br 10Describe up to two qualities that you possess that you feel would make you a good candidate for engineering at U of T.

— Feebs11

  • 0 01blockquote 01cite 10Davefromthefreeway12cite 10Hello, I have this profile due in three days and i need help making it sound rich and grammatically correct.
  • You might recall this because i posted something similar earlier but this version if very different.
  • This is the most important post in the world to me, please correct properly, thanks 12br 11u 12br 12br 10Describe up to two qualities that you possess that you feel would make you a good candidate for engineering at U of T.
  • Your answer should not exceed 150 words.
  • 12br 12u 10---------------------------------------------------12br 10As a committed member of the Western Association of Robotics Personnel for three years, I have developed outstanding leadership and teamwork skills that I use on a daily basis.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

3 Answers
0
0 01blockquote
01cite10Davefromthefreeway12cite10Hello, I have this profile due in three days and i need help making it sound rich and grammatically correct. You might recall this because i posted something similar earlier but this version if very different. This is the most important post in the world to me, please correct properly, thanks 12br
0
0
0Just a couple of other things:02br
02br
00---------------------------------------------------02br
00As a committed member of the Western Association of Robotics Personnel for three years, I have developed outstanding leadership and teamwork skills that I use on a daily basis. Hectic days with sleepless night01font01b00s02b
0
0
0Hi Dave,02br
02br
00Glad you got great and prompt help. Write again if you need anymore, OK?02br
02br
00Clive0-
0

Related Questions