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Perfect Stranger Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

QQ no.1 (quick question series)

Hi Dear Fellow Users,

I'd like to know if this sentence is correct or not, plus I need to analyze some parts of it.

All recordings I have recorded are based on the two documents you have given to me.

1. it sounds a bit awkward to my ear to have both recordings followed by I have recorded 

2. should there by a definite article between all and recordings? if not, why not?

3. should the tense be changed in the last part of the sentence? I don't know if there would be any difference here if the past simple would have been used...

Thanks
  

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1. It sounds a bit awkward to my ear to have both recordings followed by I have recorded . I agree.

  • 1.
  • It sounds a bit awkward to my ear to have both recordings followed by I have recorded .
  • I agree.
  • The sentence reads better this way: All the recordings I have made are based on the two documents you have given me.
  • 2.
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1. It sounds a bit awkward to my ear to have both recordings followed by I have recorded.
I agree. The sentence reads better this way:
All the recordings I have made are based on the two documents you have given me.

2. Should there by a definite article between all and recordings

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