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An Jiyoung Posted 19 years ago
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Q) about webcam service

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00The website I work for provide live webcam services. I would like to notice about the services to visitors of our website. Could you read the following sentences and correct them for me?02br
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00We provide live webcam services for visitors which can view mountain, beach on our website. 02br
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00Please visit our Homepage at 01a01u05000 02u02a00. ~ 02br
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00thank you.02br
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1i 00We provide live webcam services for visitors01b 00, who 02b 00can view01b 00 mountains and beaches02b 00 on our website. 02i 02br 02br 01i 00Please visit our 01b 00homepage02b 00 at 01a 05000 02a 00. ~02i 0250hrefhttp://www

— Mister Micawber

  • 1i 00We provide live webcam services for visitors01b 00, who 02b 00can view01b 00 mountains and beaches02b 00 on our website.
  • 02i 02br 02br 01i 00Please visit our 01b 00homepage02b 00 at 01a 05000 02a 00.
  • ~02i 0250hrefhttp://www
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1i00We provide live webcam services for visitors01b00, who 02b00can view01b00 mountains and beaches02b00 on our website. 02i02br
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01i00Please visit our 01b00homepage02b00 at 01a05000 02a00. ~02i0250hrefhttp://www
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0 I would rather say:02br
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00We provide on our website live webcam services for visitors which can view mountain and beach.0-
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0 00Personally, I think Mister Micawber's version is better0-
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0 Sorry I didn't look at his one:02br
00here's the correction:02br
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00We provide on our website live webcam services for visitors,01b00 02b00who can view01b00 02b00mountains and beaches.0-
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