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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Q about: "offer" --> "offers", "leave" --> "leaves"
Hello, everyone,
I would like to ask if the following personal statement is grammatically correct:
"Motivated and interested person in field of Marketing, Communication with people and improving the ability to take care of customers' needs, offer positive attitude and leave great impression of company's services"
My concern is about if "offer" has to become "offers" (or "offering") and the same with "leave" ( ---> "leaves" or "leaving").
So it would be:
"Motivated and interested person in field of Marketing, Communication with people and improving the ability to take care of customers' needs, offers/offering positive attitude and leaves/leaving great impression of company's services"
I adjusted it too many times, now I am totally confused.
Thank you for helping!
Greetings,
Deyan
I would like to ask if the following personal statement is grammatically correct:
"Motivated and interested person in field of Marketing, Communication with people and improving the ability to take care of customers' needs, offer positive attitude and leave great impression of company's services"
My concern is about if "offer" has to become "offers" (or "offering") and the same with "leave" ( ---> "leaves" or "leaving").
So it would be:
"Motivated and interested person in field of Marketing, Communication with people and improving the ability to take care of customers' needs, offers/offering positive attitude and leaves/leaving great impression of company's services"
I adjusted it too many times, now I am totally confused.
Thank you for helping!
Greetings,
Deyan
Top answer
") I might word this a little differently to make it more compact and to let it flow a little better. Here is my suggestion: Highly motivated and interested person in the field of marketing, personal communication, and improved customers' service, offers a positive attitude and leaves a great impression with company clients. Hope this helps.
- ") I might word this a little differently to make it more compact and to let it flow a little better.
- Here is my suggestion: Highly motivated and interested person in the field of marketing, personal communication, and improved customers' service, offers a positive attitude and leaves a great impression with company clients.
- Hope this helps.
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Person is singular so you want "offers" and "leaves" (although, yes, you could go with "offering" and "leaving.") I might word this a little differently to make it more compact and to let it flow a little better. Here is my suggestion:
Highly motivated and interested person in the field of marketing, personal communication, and improved customers' service, offers a positive attitude an
Highly motivated and interested person in the field of marketing, personal communication, and improved customers' service, offers a positive attitude an
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