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Abil Posted 18 years ago
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put under the care of

0 The remaining valuables of two other villagers have been put under the care of the market committee, which has asked them to contact its members and take back their belongings02br
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02b 02br 00to contact its members --01b 00 Who is 'its'? 02b 0-

— Mister Micawber

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0 01i00Background information: Rioters looted a few houses in an area. Later, the looted goods were placed under the care of the Market Committee. This committee returned most of goods to most of the villagers whose houses were looted away. Only two families  were yet to take their looted belongings back. In this situation, the Market Committee02br
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10 I would say: have been entrusted to the market committee. 0-
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0 Right, entrust is a good alternative. Thanks Philip. 0-
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01b00Two remaining02b00 01b00village families, whose valuables have been entrusted to02b00 the market committee, 01b00have been asked02b00 to contact01b00 it and reclaim02b00 their belongings.0-
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0 Hi MM,02br
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