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Contiluo Posted 11 years ago
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Pursuing of the best
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His name is Thomas. We are classmates in EGRC now, and we have a great relationship. As a matter of fact, I thought he was not an approachable person to talk when I met him at the first time, so in those day I was afraid of talking to him. However, after we have been classmates for two years, I gradually understand he is outgoing, friendly, cheerful and smart. Furthermore, he is good at every subject and he always gets top score without much efforts. He is always pursuing of the best, so I really admire his attitude. In addition, he is a funny boy who often brings us cheer and laughter. He makes our English class much more lively and interesting!
His name is Thomas. We are classmates in EGRC now, and we have a great relationship. As a matter of fact, I thought he was not an approachable person to talk when I met him at the first time, so in those day I was afraid of talking to him. However, after we have been classmates for two years, I gradually understand he is outgoing, friendly, cheerful and smart. Furthermore, he is good at every subject and he always gets top score without much efforts. He is always pursuing of the best, so I really admire his attitude. In addition, he is a funny boy who often brings us cheer and laughter. He makes our English class much more lively and interesting!
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- so back then, I was afraid of talking to him.
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- Furthermore, he is good at every subject and he always gets top score s (or marks ) without much effort .
- contiluo He is always pursuing of the best, He is always trying his best or, striving for the best .
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His name is Thomas. We are classmates in EGRC now, and we have a great relationship. As a matter of fact, I thought he was not an approachable person to talk when I met him at the first time, so in those days I was afraid of talking to him. However, over the two years that after we have been classmates for two years, I gradually realized
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