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0John’s father was a dishwasher somewhere in the city. His dream was to become a musician but his dad had told him stopped pursuing that. His father had thought that a musician career did not make money. As John had grown up, his dream had always been haunted him. He had regretted that he did not pursue. His son grew up and wanted to be musician. 00 00John encouraged his son to go for it. He knew how sad it was when you could not pursue your dream. 02br02br02br02br02br02br00Are they correct?02br02br02br02br00Thank you 0-

Clive · Accepted Answer

0Hi,02br
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01font00John’s father was a dishwasher somewhere in the city. John's dream was to become a musician but his dad told him to stop pursuing that. His dad thought that a musician did not make money. As John grew up, his dream always haunted him. He regretted that he did pursue it. John's son grew up and wanted to be musician. John encouraged his son to go for it. He knew how sad it was when you could not pursue your dream. 02font02br
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00Best wishes, Clive0-

Goodman · Answer

0Hi BW, 02br
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00Over all, it's fine. I edited some spots. 02br
00John’s father was a dishwasher somewhere in the city. His dream was to become a musician but his dad had told him 01b00[01font00to stop]02font02b00 01u00stopped02u00 pursuing that 01b01font00[dream]02font02b00 for his father had thought that a musician career 01font01b00[couldn’t]02b02font00 01u00did not02u00 make 01b01font00[any]02font02b00money. As John had grown up,01font00 02font01b01font00[not02font00 01font00being able to fulfill his]02font02b00 dream had always been haunted him. He had regretted that he did not pursue. His son grew up and wanted to be musician. John encouraged his son to go for it. He knew how sad it was when you could not pursue your dream00 0-

Yoong Liat · Answer

0Hi Goodman02br
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00His son grew up and wanted to be musician. 02br
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00Should it be '... wanted to be 01b00a02b00 musician'? Or is 'a' optional?0-

Goodman · Answer

0Liat,02br
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00You are absolutely right! My mistake to leave out the article. 0-

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