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Deathcab88 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Punctuation/Grammer Help on Short Paragraph

I'm not sure if the the punctuation is correct in this paragraph that I wrote:

With our fast delivery system your inventory will never be depleted. You can feel confident that once you sell these camcorders, you can place another cash order through our toll-free order number 1-800-356-3562 and replace your inventory overnight.
  

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You should add a comma after 'system'.

  • You should add a comma after 'system'.
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You should add a comma after 'system'.
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Do I need any other punctuation like semicolons or colons on the second sentence?

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