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Sailsofoblivion Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary
Punctuation / Too clunky?
Hello, just wondering if the sentence highlighted in red is punctuated correctly (namely the comma after "online"), and whether or not it sounds too clunky in its given context?
Emma is a writer from Glasgow. She has recently graduated with an honours degree in English, and in September 2015 will be studying an MPhil in Creative Writing. She has had numerous works published. In addition to this, for the competition stuff. Most recently, she has begun to write articles and creative non-fiction for the online, London-based CultNoise Magazine, starting in June 2015.
Emma is a writer from Glasgow. She has recently graduated with an honours degree in English, and in September 2015 will be studying an MPhil in Creative Writing. She has had numerous works published. In addition to this, for the competition stuff. Most recently, she has begun to write articles and creative non-fiction for the online, London-based CultNoise Magazine, starting in June 2015.
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sailsofoblivion In addition to this, for the competition stuff. This is not a sentence. sailsofoblivion She has recently graduated with an honours degree in Englis h and in September 2015 will be studying an MPhil in Creative Writing.
- sailsofoblivion In addition to this, for the competition stuff.
- This is not a sentence.
- sailsofoblivion She has recently graduated with an honours degree in Englis h and in September 2015 will be studying an MPhil in Creative Writing.
- sailsofoblivion Most recently, she has begun to write articles and creative non-fiction for the onlin e London-based CultNoise Magazine, starting in June 2015.
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sailsofoblivion In addition to this, for the competition stuff.This is not a sentence.
sailsofoblivion She has recently graduated with an honours degree in English and in September 2015 will be studying an MPhil in Creative Writing.
sailsofoblivion Most recently, she has begun to write articl
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teechr sailsofoblivion In addition to this, for the competition stuff.This is not a sentence.sailsofoblivion She has recently graduated with an honours degree in English and in September 2015 will be studying an MPhil in Creative Writing.sailsofoblivion Most recently, she has begun to write articles and creative non-fiction for the online London-based CultNoise Magazine,
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Yes, it's clear. Looking at the date today, I see that August is almost upon us! 
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