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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Punctuation to for inline word definition

Can someone advise the correct punctuation for the below sentence?

'In https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Electrolyte, such as https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Saline_water, the charge carriers are https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ion, atoms or molecules that have gained or lost electrons so they are electrically charged.'

The definition for ions is provided inline, for which I believe an alternate punctuation mark that a coma should be used.

Which punctuation would better indicate that 'ions' is being defined with the subsequent text, rather than appearing to present a list of 3 states (ions, atoms or molecules)?

Should it be:

[1] "In https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Electrolyte, such as https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Saline_water, the charge carriers are https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ionatoms or molecules that have gained or lost electrons so they are electrically charged";

[2] "In https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Electrolyte, such as https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Saline_water, the charge carriers are https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ion(atoms or molecules that have gained or lost electrons so they are electrically charged)";

[3] or another structure?

  

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I would prefer to reword slightly. '

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I would prefer to reword slightly.

'In electrolytes, such as salt water, the charge carriers are ions, which are atoms or molecules that have gained or lost electrons so they are electrically charged.'


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