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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Punctuation in paragraph

Hi,

Could you please correct the punctuation in the following paragraph?

It was almost ten o clock when I woke up. My alarm clock was connected by radio to some sort of N.A.T.O. supercomputer and was guaranteed accurate to one millionth of a second per century. Unfortunately, I forgot to turn it on before I went to sleep. "Great," I said to myself as I rushed down the stairs, "that’s just what I need."
Fortunately for me, the buses aren't very crowded at that time in the morning, and I got to work in less than half an hour. "Ah, Mr Anderson," said my boss, "working flexi-time, are we?"
"Sorry," I murmured, "I was at the dentists."
"Well, if youd let us know in advance," he said as he wandered off.

Thanks.
  

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It was almost ten o'clock when I woke up. My alarm clock was connected by radio to some sort of NATO supercomputer and was guaranteed accurate to one millionth of a second per century. Unfortunately, I forgot to turn it on before I went to sleep.

  • It was almost ten o'clock when I woke up.
  • My alarm clock was connected by radio to some sort of NATO supercomputer and was guaranteed accurate to one millionth of a second per century.
  • Unfortunately, I forgot to turn it on before I went to sleep.
  • " Fortunately for me, the buses aren't very crowded at that time in the morning, and I got to work in less than half an hour.
  • "Ah, Mr.
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It was almost ten o'clock when I woke up. My alarm clock was connected by radio to some sort of NATO supercomputer and was guaranteed accurate to one millionth of a second per century. Unfortunately, I forgot to turn it on before I went to sleep.

"Great," I said to myself as I rushed down the stairs, "that’s just what I need."

Fortunately for me, the buses aren't ve
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Thanks.

Could please explain the following?
Mister Micawber"I was at the dentist's."
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dentist's = dentist's office/clinic.

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