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Eddie88 Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Punctuation in compound complex sentence

Hi,

When there is a compund complex sentence with two dependent clause like below, do they need commas between them?

Although it was dark, when I went home, I was hungry, so I searched the fridge for food.

Does there need to be a comma here?

This example may not need a comma but in other examples, may a comma be needed?

Any good websites on this?

Thanks
  

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I don't understand the incompatibility of hunger and darkness.

  • I don't understand the incompatibility of hunger and darkness.
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I don't understand the incompatibility of hunger and darkness.
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Yes, it is a horrible example. But I am merely using it as such.

I wwould just like to know if the two dependent clauses need to be separated by a comma. I will try give a better example for you:

Although I am overwieght and on a diet, when I walked home, I searched the fridge, so I could satiate myself.

Does there always need to be a comma between the two subord
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Actually, that is a much better example both structurally and semantically, because the conditions (overweight, on a diet) are obviously independent of walking home, where in your first example, the darkness and the walking can have an interdependence. This is how I would punctuate both (with the intentions of semantic clarity and sentence cohesion):

Although it was dark when
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Thanks a lot. When I decide whether a comma is neccessary, I have generally not taken into consideration whether the clauses are interdependent or not.

Although I am overweight and on a diet, when I walked home, I searched the fridge so I could satiate myself.

I assume that the comma is neccessary between the two subordinate clauses for the following
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It must be personal preference
Except when you're working for a publishing company. I vary with the perceived dependence of the main clause on the result clause.
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I'd much appreciate a reply to this as these two questions have always troubled me.

Oh really. So you, personally, base it on the dependence of the subordinate clause for the independent clause. I assume you mean the comma is used when they are independent.

Are there any websites that talk about punctuation between
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Although it was dark when I went home, I was hungry so I searched the fridge for food.

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