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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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punctuation in a list?

Would this be right?

I give you two options: (1) learn how to write intriguing scenes, with a big focus on dialogue; or (2) never make a video again.

  

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Well, it's rather over-punctuated. I would do this myself: I give you two options: learn how to write intriguing scenes with a big focus on dialogue-- or never make a video again.

— Mister Micawber

  • Well, it's rather over-punctuated.
  • I would do this myself: I give you two options: learn how to write intriguing scenes with a big focus on dialogue-- or never make a video again.
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Well, it's rather over-punctuated. I would do this myself:

I give you two options: learn how to write intriguing scenes with a big focus on dialogue-- or never make a video again.
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