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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Punctuation help, please?
How do I correctly punctuate this sentence:
"These connections and relationships are interwoven, and we all, namely the judges and judicial officers, share in the creation of the finished fabric, that is, the perceptions that we give and the connections we make to the community as well as the perceptions, support, and connections which we have and make with each other."
My question mostly relate4s to what punction goes between "fabric" and "that is,"
Thanks
KT
"These connections and relationships are interwoven, and we all, namely the judges and judicial officers, share in the creation of the finished fabric, that is, the perceptions that we give and the connections we make to the community as well as the perceptions, support, and connections which we have and make with each other."
My question mostly relate4s to what punction goes between "fabric" and "that is,"
Thanks
KT
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" My question mostly relate4s to what punction goes between "fabric" and "that is," I wouldn't say it's wrong as written, although I'd consider a comma after 'community'. But my overall comment is that this seems like a rambling sentence that isnot easy to understand, because it is trying to say too much. I recomend breaking it into two or more separate sentences.
- " My question mostly relate4s to what punction goes between "fabric" and "that is," I wouldn't say it's wrong as written, although I'd consider a comma after 'community'.
- But my overall comment is that this seems like a rambling sentence that isnot easy to understand, because it is trying to say too much.
- I recomend breaking it into two or more separate sentences.
- Clive
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Hi,
How do I correctly punctuate this sentence:
"These connections and relationships are interwoven, and we all, namely the judges and judicial officers, share in the creation of the finished fabric, that is, the perceptions that we give and the connections we make to the community as well as the perceptions, support, and connections which we h
How do I correctly punctuate this sentence:
"These connections and relationships are interwoven, and we all, namely the judges and judicial officers, share in the creation of the finished fabric, that is, the perceptions that we give and the connections we make to the community as well as the perceptions, support, and connections which we h
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