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Lordskorpz Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Punctuation Correction

"Tim, wants a toy car, for Christmas. However, his mother, has bought him an Action Man, instead. Time is not going to pleased, when he opens his Christmas present on Christmas Day!"

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You seem to love those commas! "Tim, wants a toy car, (incorrect punctuation) for Christmas. However, his mother, (incorrect punctuation) has bought him an Action Man, (unnecessary punctuation) instead.

  • You seem to love those commas!
  • "Tim, wants a toy car, (incorrect punctuation) for Christmas.
  • However, his mother, (incorrect punctuation) has bought him an Action Man, (unnecessary punctuation) instead.
  • "
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You seem to love those commas!

"Tim, wants a toy car, (incorrect punctuation) for Christmas. However, his mother, (incorrect punctuation) has bought him an Action Man, (unnecessary punctuation) instead. Time is not going to pleased, (incorrect punctuation) when he opens his Christmas present on Christmas Day

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