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Daithy Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Punctuation..

I was warranting this item, and I wrote this:

"Thanks for the response. If you believe that it is a good product, and it's only individual flaw, then send me another one, but if you believe that there is no point, I'll be happy with a refund."

Is my punctuation correct? I was quite unsure whether to put coma between "and" and "product". Also, I could have started a new sentence with "but if you believe...", but I felt better using a coma.

Thanks.
  

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I was warranting this item, No. I was making a claim under the warranty of this item, and I wrote this: "Thanks for the response. " Is my punctuation correct?

— Clive

  • I was warranting this item, No.
  • I was making a claim under the warranty of this item, and I wrote this: "Thanks for the response.
  • " Is my punctuation correct?
  • I was quite unsure whether to put a comma between "and" and "product".
  • ", but I felt better using a comma .
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I was warranting this item, No. I was making a claim under the warranty of this item,


and I wrote this:

"Thanks for the response. If you believe that it is a good product, and it's only an individual flaw, then send me another one, but if you believe that there is no point, I'll be happy with a refund."
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Thank you. "If you believe that it is a good product and it is only an individual flaw,"

"and it is only an individual flaw" can stand on it's own, so I was unsure whether to put a comma there. On a second thought it describes the subject "product", so it's a tough one.
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The phrase 'an individual flaw' does not really work well.

I suggest this improvement
If you believe that it is a good product and that the problem was just with the specific item I received, then send me another one, but if you believe that there is no point, I'll be happy wi
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