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Vsuresh Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Punctuation

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Please tell me if I have punctuated the passage.

Haritha was sad that day. Ms. Clock was on leave. She went to her place and sat. When the bell for the first period rang, she took her books, and she walked to the French class. Ms. Flavia was her teacher. Seeing Haritha sad, she asked, "What is wrong?" Why do you look so downcast.?" Haritha kept looking at the floor. Tears started rolling down her cheeks. Ms Flavia said, "What a fine day it is!" "Cheer up, my little girl. Won’t  mother earth feel sad seeing one beautiful flower in it being downcast?"
  

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vsuresh Please tell me if I have punctuated the passage. Yes, you certainly have. Unfortunately, some of it is wrong: Haritha was sad that day.

— Mister Micawber

  • vsuresh Please tell me if I have punctuated the passage.
  • Yes, you certainly have.
  • Unfortunately, some of it is wrong: Haritha was sad that day.
  • Ms.
  • Clock was on leave.
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vsureshPlease tell me if I have punctuated the passage.
Yes, you certainly have. Unfortunately, some of it is wrong:

Haritha was sad that day. Ms. Clock was on leave. She went to her place and sat. When the bell for the first period rang, she took her books, and she walked to the French class. Ms. Flavia was her teacher. Seeing Haritha sad, she as
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Thank you very much,sir.
Mister MicawberAs for style, you have too many simple sentences. Some should be combined into compound and complex ones.
I will be careful about this.
Thank you for your comment.
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