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Grammar

Punctuating 2 sentences

Would someone please tell me the proper way to punctuate the following two sentences --

1) What about Social Security, have you filed for any Social Security Disability claim? (common, semi-colon, or question mark after Social Security?)


2) Let me ask you: Before this accident happened, had you ever been involved in any other motor vehicle accidents? (colon or common after "Let me ask you"?)

Thanks for any assistance.
JBM
  

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Hey, JB. Pretty iffy sentences to punctuate. Personally, after the first 'Social Security' and 'Let me ask you', I would use an m-dash.

  • Hey, JB.
  • Pretty iffy sentences to punctuate.
  • Personally, after the first 'Social Security' and 'Let me ask you', I would use an m-dash.
  • However, some publications eschew this handy tool.
  • More formally, the only good solution to (1) is to create two sentences: 'What about Social Security?
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Hey, JB.

Pretty iffy sentences to punctuate. Personally, after the first 'Social Security' and 'Let me ask you', I would use an m-dash. However, some publications eschew this handy tool.

More formally, the only good solution to (1) is to create two sentences: 'What about Social Security? Have you filed...?'.

For (2), a 'whether' and some rearrangement would be goo
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Thanks MisterM..

Rearranging is not a possibility. I am transcribing a deposition. It has to be verbatim. Now you say to make "What about Social Security?" a separate sentence. That is possible. My question was: Is it a sentence? Is "what" the verb? That is what I was confused about. Thanks, again!

JB
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About your question: 'What about Social Security?' came so naturally that I did not notice. It is however, a recognized form-- an irregular wh-question used mainly in conversation, fragmentary and used as a directive. There has been ellipsis of some words, including the verb: 'what (have you done) about Social Security?' Since this is a recorded conversation, its use is more natural than the i
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Thanks, Mister M,
I think I have settled the issue. Guess I was being a little too nit-picky! I mainly just wanted to know the correct way to punctuate.
Thanks again. I'll be back with future grammar questions!

JBM
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Good, JB.

Actually, this thread has been rolling around in my mind-- as to how to punctuate transcribed speech when one is trying to write it down verbatim, as in court depositions. (Unless there are indeed a set of special rules preserved somewhere) I would think there would be a lot of m-dashes, comma splices, ellipses, and fragmentary sentences used, because that is the way we speak.

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