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Meeae Posted 15 years ago
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Hello there,
I have to revise following.
I did it but i could not be sure that it is correct or not.
Could you help me?
First one is the original text, and second one is revised text by me.
1. I want a man who knows what love is all about you are generous kind thoughtful people who are not like you admit to being useless and inferior you have ruined me for other men I yearn for you I have no feelings whatsoever when we're apart I can be forever happy will you let me be yours Jill.
2. I want a man, who knows what love is all about. you are generous, kind, thoughtful people; who are not like you admit to being useless and inferior. you have ruined me for other men. I yearn for you. I have no feelings whatsoever, when we're apart, I can be forever happy will you let me be yours Jill.
THANK YOU:)
I have to revise following.
I did it but i could not be sure that it is correct or not.
Could you help me?
First one is the original text, and second one is revised text by me.
1. I want a man who knows what love is all about you are generous kind thoughtful people who are not like you admit to being useless and inferior you have ruined me for other men I yearn for you I have no feelings whatsoever when we're apart I can be forever happy will you let me be yours Jill.
2. I want a man, who knows what love is all about. you are generous, kind, thoughtful people; who are not like you admit to being useless and inferior. you have ruined me for other men. I yearn for you. I have no feelings whatsoever, when we're apart, I can be forever happy will you let me be yours Jill.
THANK YOU:)
Top answer
Hi, 1. I want a man who knows what love is all about . Y ou are a generous , kind , thoughtful person who is not like you admit to being : useless and inferior .
- Hi, 1.
- I want a man who knows what love is all about .
- Y ou are a generous , kind , thoughtful person who is not like you admit to being : useless and inferior .
- Y ou have ruined me for other men .
- I yearn for you .
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Hi,
1. I want a man who knows what love is all about. You are a generous, kind, thoughtful person who is
1. I want a man who knows what love is all about. You are a generous, kind, thoughtful person who is
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As an academic exercise:
You admit to being useless and inferior. You have ruined me. For other men, I yearn. For you? I have no feelings whatsoever! When we're apart, I can be forever happy. Will you let me be?!
Yours,
Jill
You admit to being useless and inferior. You have ruined me. For other men, I yearn. For you? I have no feelings whatsoever! When we're apart, I can be forever happy. Will you let me be?!
Yours,
Jill
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