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Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
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Hi everyone!
I'm in need of expert help with the following problem. I have an assignment in university to write a publication, the title of which I'm trying to come up with. The content of the publication is to study how the development process of electronic products differs when comparing consumer products and industrial products.
How should I put this nicely? My professor (who is not really that fluent in English) had suggested "How productization differs between consumer and industrial electronics". In my opinion this does not sound good at all! I would have gone for a title such as "Differences in the development of consumer and industrial electronic products". Still I don't think this is optimal.
Does anyone have any ideas or suggestions? I would be most grateful for any input or feedback...
Cheers!
Mankku
I'm in need of expert help with the following problem. I have an assignment in university to write a publication, the title of which I'm trying to come up with. The content of the publication is to study how the development process of electronic products differs when comparing consumer products and industrial products.
How should I put this nicely? My professor (who is not really that fluent in English) had suggested "How productization differs between consumer and industrial electronics". In my opinion this does not sound good at all! I would have gone for a title such as "Differences in the development of consumer and industrial electronic products". Still I don't think this is optimal.
Does anyone have any ideas or suggestions? I would be most grateful for any input or feedback...
Cheers!
Mankku
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Your own suggestion seems reasonable. Some suggestions: A study of the different development processes for industrial and consumer electronic products. Process development variations for industrial and consumer electronic products.
- Your own suggestion seems reasonable.
- Some suggestions: A study of the different development processes for industrial and consumer electronic products.
- Process development variations for industrial and consumer electronic products.
- Variations in development processes for industrial and consumer electronic products.
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Your own suggestion seems reasonable. Some suggestions:
A study of the different development processes for industrial and consumer electronic products.
Process development variations for industrial and consumer electronic products.
Variations in development processes for industrial and consumer electronic products.
A study of the different development processes for industrial and consumer electronic products.
Process development variations for industrial and consumer electronic products.
Variations in development processes for industrial and consumer electronic products.
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Thank you Feebs11!
I like your suggestions very much, and will consider them thoroughly!
Cheers,
Mankku
I like your suggestions very much, and will consider them thoroughly!
Cheers,
Mankku
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