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Contiluo Posted 13 years ago
Vocabulary

public servant

Please help me correct the following paragraph.

It’s my honor to be here to deliver an English speech to you. It’s a challenge as well as an opportunity to express my aspirations and ideals for public service. Becoming a public servant is what I have chosen for my career, I have discovered that commitment, involvement, dedication, and a great affection for my hometown are necessary to fulfill successfully my promises.
  

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I have underlined a couple of problems. Hometown is inappropriate unless it is relatively small. It’s my honor to be here to deliver an English speech to you.

  • I have underlined a couple of problems.
  • Hometown is inappropriate unless it is relatively small.
  • It’s my honor to be here to deliver an English speech to you.
  • It’s a challenge as well as an opportunity to express my aspirations and ideals for public service.
  • Becoming a public servant is what I have chosen for my career, I have discovered that commitment, involvement, dedication, and a great affection for my hometown are necessary to fulfill successfully my promises.
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I have underlined a couple of problems. Hometown is inappropriate unless it is relatively small.

It’s my honor to be here to deliver an English speech to you. It’s a challenge as well as an opportunity to express my aspirations and ideals for public service. Becoming a public servant is what I have chosen for my career, I have discovered that commitment, involvement, dedication, a
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I have discovered that commitment, involvement, dedication, and a great affection for my native place are necessary to carry the promise into practice successfully.
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I have discovered that commitment, involvement, dedication, and a great affection for my native place are necessary to put my promise into practice successfully.

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