1) We would appreciate it if you kindly provide us further clarifications on the eligibility criteria for the applicant.
2) We would appreciate it if you kindly provide us with further clarifications on the eligibility criteria for the applicant.
Which one sounds better? Can anyone also explain to me what’s the difference between #1 and #2, please
You need "would" again in the sentence: We would appreciate it if you would provide... Both say the same thing, and I might say either. There is no real difference.
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You need "would" again in the sentence: We would appreciate it if you would provide...
Both say the same thing, and I might say either. There is no real difference. The second one might sound a little clearer to some people.
kat2784Which one sounds better?
That's a matter of personal preference rather than grammar.
I would probably use the second one, but that's just my choice. If you like the sound of the first one better, use that one.
CJ