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protracted war

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During the protracted war of repatriation and anti-repatriation, still there were hundreds of thousands of North Koreans to escape from their iron-curtained country to victory. The true number of the escapees has been remaining a permanent puzzle, a Goldbach Conjecture for sociology.
  

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During the protracted war of repatriation and anti-repatriation, there were still hundreds of thousands of North Koreans who escaped through their iron curtain to freedom. The true number of escapees remains a permanent conundrum for sociology. The arcane reference to the mathematical riddle is inappropriate to a general reading audience.

  • During the protracted war of repatriation and anti-repatriation, there were still hundreds of thousands of North Koreans who escaped through their iron curtain to freedom.
  • The true number of escapees remains a permanent conundrum for sociology.
  • The arcane reference to the mathematical riddle is inappropriate to a general reading audience.
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During the protracted war of repatriation and anti-repatriation, there were still hundreds of thousands of North Koreans who escaped through their iron curtain to freedom. The true number of escapees remains a permanent conundrum for sociology.

The arcane reference to the mathematical riddle is inappropriate to a general reading audience.
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I think your rewriting such as "escaped through their iron curtain to freedom" is perfect!

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