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BW2/3 Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

prosperity

A goverment is stable and prosperity because the majority of people are happy.

The essence of our goverment is free enterpreise and freedom of speech.

Are they OK?

Thank you
  

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Hello BW Not quite – I'll mark the parts that need to be changed: 1. A goverment is stable and prosperity because the majority of people are happy. 2.

— MrPedantic

  • Hello BW Not quite – I'll mark the parts that need to be changed: 1.
  • A goverment is stable and prosperity because the majority of people are happy.
  • 2.
  • The essence of our goverment is free enterpreise and freedom of speech.
  • All the best, MrP
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Hello BW

Not quite – I'll mark the parts that need to be changed:

1. A goverment is stable and prosperity because the majority of people are happy.

2. The essence of our goverment is free enterpreise and freedom of speech.

All the best,

MrP
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Hi,

A goverment is stable and prosperity because the majority of people are happy.

A goverment is stable and prosperous when/if the majority of (most) citizens are happy.

'citizens' is better than 'its people'. I don't belong to my government. It belongs to me.

The essence of our government is free enterprise
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