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Parwiz Noori Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing

proposal review

As for as we afghan nation know and is clear to all that you are here in
Afghanistan in order to assist us we will never forget your humanitarian
Cooperation and always would try to have a good hospitality, to be closer
With each other, working together for having better and bright future.
So I am proposing from your kind Excellency to give me a chance for having a mechanical shop in (RS HQ MWA) where I could repair & fix cellphones, Laptops, IOS, Android, Tablets many more items that I would be able to help you and so my family.

Global shop has served his best in the following camps (Camp Eggers, Camp Airwing Kabul international airport, Camp Invictai. Camp Montrand Bagram Airbase from 2008 until now.

If given an opportunity I will give in my best to live up to your expectations hopping for a favorable response.
  

Top answer

You should not start every line with a capital letter. They are only needed for names, the letter I when referring to yourself and when starting new sentences or paragraphs.

  • You should not start every line with a capital letter.
  • They are only needed for names, the letter I when referring to yourself and when starting new sentences or paragraphs.
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You should not start every line with a capital letter. They are only needed for names, the letter I when referring to yourself and when starting new sentences or paragraphs.
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In the interest of serving the better future of the Afghan nation, I propose to open a small electronic repair shop "Global Shop" in RS HQ MWA where I could repair cellphones, laptops, IOS and Android devices, tablets and many other similar items. I would charge competitive rates, and employ 2 people besides myself. The shop would be open from 8 am to 6 pm, but closed for holidays. Repairs would
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I really appreciate your best effort regarding my proposal.ThanksParwiz

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