Hi, The conclusion needs a bit more punch. ' As the essay is now, readers have no idea what you're setting out to prove until they get to the end of the essay, which is likely to cause frustration. To understand what the "inverted pyramid" name means, picture an upside-down triangle -- one with the narrow tip pointing downward and the broad base pointing upward.
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