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Lucas21c Posted 13 years ago
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A sudden increase of communications between staff members needs to be analyzed at the company level. For example, there is such a case that employees gather in small groups of twos and threes without no new subjects coming up.
  

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A sudden increase in communication between staff members needs to be analyzed at the company level. For example, employees may gather in small groups of twos and threes to discuss nothing new.

  • A sudden increase in communication between staff members needs to be analyzed at the company level.
  • For example, employees may gather in small groups of twos and threes to discuss nothing new.
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A sudden increase in communication between staff members needs to be analyzed at the company level. For example, employees may gather in small groups of twos and threes to discuss nothing new.

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