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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Proper grammar

Throughout the years, I have been so proud and impressed with all (should I omit all ) the effort you (you've) put into doing your best. Your hardwork, dedication and patience has (have) brought many wonderful and exciting (should i take out exciting) experiences and accomlishments, and you should be very proud of yourself.

Always believe in yourself, the way I believe in you.


Throughout the years, I have been so proud and impressed with all the effort you put into everything you do (did). Your hardwork, dedication and patience has (have) brought many wonderful experiences and accomplishments.

Always believe in yourself, the way I believe in you.

I'm trying to write a small paragraph t my son as he graduates from school this year and I'm a litle rusty on my grammar. If there is anything you might add to complete this better, please feel free. I have been having a rought time with this. I would appreciate your help. Thank you.
  

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Throughout the years, I have always been very proud of all the effort you have put into doing your best. Your hard work , dedication and patience have brought you many wonderful and exciting experiences and accomplishments , and you should be very proud of yourself. Always believe in yourself the way I believe in you.

  • Throughout the years, I have always been very proud of all the effort you have put into doing your best.
  • Your hard work , dedication and patience have brought you many wonderful and exciting experiences and accomplishments , and you should be very proud of yourself.
  • Always believe in yourself the way I believe in you.
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Throughout the years, I have always been very proud of all the effort you have put into doing your best. Your hard work, dedication and patience have brought you many wonderful and exciting experiences and accomplishments, and you should be very proud of yourself.

Always believe in yourself the way I believe in you.

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