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The nuclear family is well adopted to move geographically due to its size. Do you think children benefit in any way from moving? Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

The fast paced of current lifestyle has caused people to switch their professions significantly more than the past. This might even lead to travelling overseas for the sake of better off job and income which brings about a nuclear family to leave their own city or country. Although some believe that this will have a destructive effect on children, I personally think that moving to another location for the sake of better living conditions will develop social skills of children and help them to be successful in their education.

To start with, resettling in another city or country will benefit children, improving their social characteristics because they can meet and communicate different people with different backgrounds. Skilled people usually emigrate to developed countries, like Australia, resulting in better lifestyle and higher income. It can be found various people with different culture, ranging from Europeans to Asians, and with different religion in developed countries such as Australia or USA. When children have the opportunity to speak to and to play with other children, it will promote their social skills. They can find new friends. Some might disagree with resettling of children to a totally new place. However, researches have proven that children are capable of adapting to a new environment considerably more than adults.

Additionally, immigration to another country, will open window of opportunities for children. They will have access to a better educational system in developed countries which will help them in their future life. Living in another country gives the opportunity to children to learn a second language. Finally, if they like to engage in sports, the sports facilities are fundamentally more advanced in developed countries. These make moving to another geographical location an attractive and useful option for the future generations especially those from developing countries.

In conclusion, immigration is not only beneficial for children in terms of their social abilities but also is helpful for their education which makes their future brighter and prepare them for their real life.